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TADA~
This is my first SA Attempt, of your FC (which I maded for yous) Louise the Cheetah!
I ACTUALLY LOVE THIS APART FROM THE FACT THE HIGHLIGHTS ARE TOO FAT BUT WHO FUCKING CARES I MEAN LOOK AT IT ;_;
First attempt = YES.
critiques are acceptable, but not compulsory.
This is my first SA Attempt, of your FC (which I maded for yous) Louise the Cheetah!I ACTUALLY LOVE THIS APART FROM THE FACT THE HIGHLIGHTS ARE TOO FAT BUT WHO FUCKING CARES I MEAN LOOK AT IT ;_;
First attempt = YES.
critiques are acceptable, but not compulsory.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI guess I can go a for critique |D.
Lets start with anatomy. Her fingers on her right hand are too long. The longest finger is the middle finger and they shouldn't be the same size. The crouch area looks odd. It looks to bulgy. It need to be more straight so it doesn't like a boner or some <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/>. The legs just look...horrible. First of all the left leg is smaller than the right leg. And it is happening to get bigger? When your drawing the legs, make sure you make them big for the calves at the top where the butt starts then make them kind of like a funnel going down to the top of the boots. The boots look too crooked. First of all, leg's arn't spahgetti xD. They can't magically bend like rubbed, you have to at least put some kind of crease from the knee to the actual leg (if that makes any sense xD). The bottom of her shoes looks awkward as well. for some reason her left shoe is fatter and shorter than the other. Make sure their the same size <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>.The coloring looks fine except when you do SA style, the outline part of the character needs to be smooth looking. I can see that you used the pressure on the outlined part. THATS A NO NO! Keep the lines the same when you are linarting in SA style <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/>. And also the lines inside need to be smaller. The shading looks okay..could use some more work, just don't over use the light parts and make them disappear as much.I know its your first time at this but keep practicing <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> and I am sure you will get it right ^^ <3